Tuesday 16 August 2011

Tracks (near sand)


Then hours re
move & commence
like quantities -
afraid
, languid

+ monumental.
Judged to dream
the quiet house
on the edge of
paper

some spirit
ill-knowledged by
/ nakedest:
in a road, on a starry cloud
zoomed drifter ...,

3 comments:

  1. well, at the risk of sounding like a fanboy this here is brilliant
    'the quiet house
    on the edge of
    paper'

    then

    'in a road, on a starry cloud
    zoomed drifter...,'


    hm. well no pt denying it. i am a fanboy when it comes to yr pieces. ^_^

    arka

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  2. +monumental

    ok. i'll stop now. i am embarrassing myself.

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  3. Arka - thanks, so much appreciated :-). Trying to get everything as precise as I can, within a drifting logic ...

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