Two fine orchestr poems, like how the rhythm/vowels/consonances in two different ways takes you down to the last word, and affect how the imagery comes over - quite "classical" really!
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(I can't spell this morning! Try again)Thanks very much, Barbara. I was aiming for something hieratic, "classical" - pleased they work like that :-).
Two fine orchestr poems, like how the rhythm/vowels/consonances in two different ways takes you down to the last word, and affect how the imagery comes over - quite "classical" really!
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ReplyDeleteThanks very much, Barbara. I was aiming for something hieratic, "classical" - pleased they work like that :-).